[Thursday, Mar. 03, 2005][13:09]

review: lttln.

first impression: cyan, magenta, yellow, black

layout: [twenty-four of forty-nine points] there's a few format issues with the page, but overall, the layout is pleasing to the eye and easy to navigate. your "reviews" link fails to work, as does your "rings" link. better breaks in paragraphing might help as well.

content: [sixty-two of eighty-seven points] of course, old habits die hard, miss ann. but onwards. your relationship with the josh-person lasted a month. trust us. at your age, such a thing is normal. one habit you seem to have is not closing your italics tag.

[however], such things happen to the best of us, and ultimately that's what will grant the experience needed to survive adulthood. while a friends-with-benefits relationship is hard to maintain for anyone, at least you seem to realize that such an arrangement is doomed for failure. "Why do people feel like they have to act put on a show for everyone? Why cant he just be himself?" a small secret: it is because he is a teenage boy.

your spelling has improved notably, but there are still errors. you do seem to posess a better idea of what you're doing. keep working, you are on the right path.

frequency: [seven of twenty-two points] irregularly.

bonus: [seven points] for integrity.

judgement: just hang in there. things do get better. we promise. college will be a breath of fresh air for you. we must commend you on your not succumbing to peer pressure. such a thing can be difficult in the volatile high school enviroment.

[one hundred of one hundred fifty-eight points]
[sixty-three percent]
[mister biased]

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