[Tuesday, Oct. 05, 2004][]

review: linusthegirl

first impression: Is that Linus? Our Charlie Brown knowledge is severely lacking. Is that a manila background?.


layout: [sixteen of thirty points] Your background color screams of cream. Your picture is blurry though, and not even in the way that we can ignore it. Your links seem to work, and your scroll bar is okay.


content: [fifty eight of sixty points]Your spelling and grammar appear to be impeccable. It�s wonderful to see a semi-colon in use.

Reading your diary is like curling up and reading a worn out copy of your favorite book. You don�t have rampant excitement in your writing, but you have love for your children and your cats, and you express this well. Then, all of a sudden, you get one step deeper with this entry, where you talk about your fear. It was a sudden tone change that disappeared with the next entry. Your diary is pleasant though. It�s an easy and enjoyable read.

frequency: [ten of ten points] You skip a day or two every now and again, but you make up for it with multiples.

bonus points: [one point] Miss Lisa almost cried when the kitten died.

judgement: It seems your diary should be on paper rather than the internet. It just is the sort of diary that should have the personal touch of being hand written.
[eighty-five]

[eight-five percent]

[Miss Lisa]

Saturday, Oct. 02, 2004
Review: twistedword
review: twistedword

first impression: What a sad little man he is.

layout: [twenty-eight of thirty points] The gray is sort of bleh, but it goes with your image in a way. The image itself is kind of blurry, but water and palm trees are soothing from time to time. Your links work fine. Everything is simple enough.

content: [fifty-six of sixty points]Your entries are so tiny. The things you�re writing seem like the things you�d scribble down on a piece of paper when you�re feeling too many things at once. What we have here isn�t a story of any sort, but the behind the scenes footage. That�s to say, it�s appears to be your responses to the story of your life. The general shortness of your entries makes your diary easy to read. We just go right on from one entry to the next. You strike the good angst notes, as opposed to the annoying sort. Again, we have no idea what makes some good and some bad. Reading what you write is like looking in a mirror, and that, as you seem to realize, is not necessarily a good thing.

frequency: [eight of ten points] You�re semi-frequent.

judgement: While your writing didn�t bore, it didn�t really say much about who you are. You write in a certain style, and that style doesn�t permit self explanations. It�s all feeling.

[ninety-two points]
[ninety-two percent]

[Miss Lisa]

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