[Tuesday, Sept. 21, 2004][]

review: daze-of-rain

first impression: The rainy grays and orange background are pleasant and fit the upcoming autumn. The first entry read seems delicately beautiful and provokes interest in your past entries.

layout: [twenty-seven of thirty points] The color orange you�ve used doesn�t give off a dark tone, but isn�t cheerfully bright. It�s a comfortable color. Your image is a wonderful one, but it lacks the crystal clarity that we here prefer. It could quite possibly be because of the rain, so few points will be removed because of it. The font you have on your image is plain. It just doesn�t seem to fit in.

Your scrolling is simple, and your links all appear to work. Good job.

content: [fifty-seven of sixty points] We started here. It was written well enough, and seemed heartfelt and true. Emotion is a good thing. You are lead by your heart through the trials of your life, and you write about those trials here. You write out your troubles here as a sort of therapy. Such writing makes people want to read what you write. It�s as if we were stepping right into your life with you.

You have such a deep love for your child. It�s understandable, since most mothers would, but your words express it so well. You also greatly describe the difficulties with your husband. Your writing makes the reader feel for you, without screaming for attention in the manner some other writers do. Your tales are an interesting read. On occasion, you use the �LOL��s and other such abbreviations, but it�s infrequent enough to bother, and your overall content makes up for it. You also have a number of entries composed of only lyrics, which, even when they apply to your life, take away from the flow of things.

frequency: [nine of ten points] You started out at a rather infrequent pace, but it wasn�t too long before you got into the swing of things and started writing consistently.

judgement: Your diary didn�t have flaming baton excitement, but for some reason, it made us unable to stop reading. The love for your child and the difficulties of your marriage and friendships are topics that people would enjoy reading, and could quite possibly relate to. You don�t go into extreme detail about things, but you give enough information to keep the reader into it. You also don�t require going back years and years to figure out what you�re talking about.

[ninety-three]

[ninety-three percent]

[Miss Lisa]

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