[Sunday, Sept. 26, 2004][]

review: theascension

first impression: Almost instantly we can see a brooding, artistic poet. The good kind.

layout: [twenty-six of thirty points] We have a pretty dark layout here. That�s an interesting image. There�s no distortion or anything, which is good. You have solid color scroll bars, which are annoying to use. There was an issue with your older links, but it seems the problem is with our computer, so you can�t really fix that.
content: [fifty-eight of sixty points] You�ve admitted that you�re an �Oh, look at me, I'm so angsty, nobody loves me, I hate myself and want to die� sort of person, but have no control over this. This is understandable enough. Stereotypes are difficult to escape these days. At least you admit it.

Your life revolves around your relationship with Kira. You write about your fears concerning him, what you want with him, and what you do with him. He�s your reason to live, and because of this, it�s only natural that you write frequently about him. He's at the core of your writing, which gives you a pleasing sort of consistency.

It�s hard to explain your writing. It�s gleeful in a dark sort of way. It seems like you�re walking on black sunshine. It�s a blended contrast of sorts that makes your diary worth reading, because you never sound too miserable or too happy, despite how you actually feel. You aren�t just a stereotype, because you mix your death boy ways with a feeling of optimism, that you most likely don�t see yourself. That�s only how it appears to us, though.

As far as your grammar and spelling, you write pretty well. Your spelling isn�t always perfect, but it�s appears to have gotten much better recently.

frequency: [three of ten points] You write when you feel like it. There are periods of time when you don�t write for a while.

bonus points: [four points] Your more recent entries made a teenage girl giggle and blush.

judgement: You hate 99.9% of humans. We would hope that this will change with time, but there�s a pretty good chance that it won�t change. People aren�t all that great anyhow.
[ninety-one of one hundred]
[ninety-one percent]
[Miss Lisa]


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